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Essays that sound like you

The personal statement and supplements, from blank page to final draft.

The problem with most college essays

Most college essays sound the same. Not because students are the same, but because everyone is drawing from the same pool of advice, the same example essays, and increasingly the same AI tools. Admissions officers read thousands of these. The generic ones blur together within seconds.

The fix is not fancier writing. It is a better story, told plainly. My job is to help you find the material that only you have, then get out of the way of your voice. When we are done, the essay should sound like you on your best day, not like me, and not like a template.

How it works

Excavate

Excavate

Long, unhurried conversations about your life. The best essay material almost never comes from the obvious highlights. It hides in the small stuff.

Draft

Draft

You write. I respond with real feedback, not rewrites. We go as many rounds as the essay needs, and we keep your voice intact the whole way.

Refine

Refine

Structure, clarity, and the last-mile polish. Then we pressure-test it: does this say something about you that the rest of the application cannot?

What's covered

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The personal statement. The main Common App essay, from first brainstorm through the final read.

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Every supplement. The why-us essays, the short answers, and the weird prompts, each one tuned to the school it is for.

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The activities list. 150 characters per activity is its own kind of writing. We make every one count.

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A word on AI. I will never write your essay, and neither should a chatbot. Colleges are getting good at spotting it, and it defeats the purpose. Your voice is the asset here.

Common questions

When should we start?
Summer before senior year is ideal for the personal statement. Supplements follow in the fall. Juniors who want a head start can begin the excavation conversations in spring.
Do you edit or rewrite?
I give notes, ask questions, and flag what is not working. I do not write sentences for you. It stays your essay, which is the entire point.
Can we do essays only, without full counseling?
Yes. Essay development works as a standalone engagement, and it is a common way for seniors to work with me.
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